May 2, 2005

Dear FutureMe, Roses are red Violets are blue Poems you write Have always been poo So I'm wondering if After all this time Your poety does Slightly more than just rhyme It would be really cool If you could just use Slightly more imagery Than reds & blues In the age this was written You just didn't care You sat and just viewed The world from your chair So i wish for the future That you have grown To make observations And thoughts of your own Its more than just poetry Its your whole world view That at present must rhyme With the colour of blue In 3 years of life One hopes you can learn How to display your views With a bit more concern For literary devices For an interesting read Oh such a cool thing That would be to achieve I don't want riches or beauties In 3 long years time Just the ability To write a good rhyme xx